Aashaon pratyashaon k bhanwar mein,
Kab se jhool rahi thi mai,
Nihswarth samvednaein,
Ab to bhul rahi thi mai.
Tere aane se jaana,
Swarth se bacha hai koi kona,
Nirasha mein ummid ki kiran,
Bitiya rani tum hi hona.
Nishchal sacchi aur pyaari,
Teri ye muskaan na badle,
Sacche, gehre rishte milein tujhe,
Par iss rishte ki pehchaan na badle❤
©abhikavya
Speechless ❤❤ I have started to love hindi more after reading your beautiful poems💕
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Thank you💖💖
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Very nice work…specially this line – Nirasha mein ummid ki kiran
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Thank you so muchh😄😁
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just awsome👌
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Thank you sadhana😄😀
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Beautifully penned. 😀
Frankly speaking, I could never ever write poetry in Hindi. Though I try in English, but it never worked.
Anyhow, keep writing. 🙂
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Thank you so much😄😊
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You’re welcome. 😁
P.S. Thanks for the follow. ☺️
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Ahh kitni sundarta SE apne khubsoorat rishte ko vyakt Kiya Hai !
Shabdo ka talmel ek dum sateek , Nye words ka upyukt prayog bhut hi achhe !
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Thank you so much😊😅
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Mam !
कद कुछ भी नहीं है मेरा मगर फिर भी एक छोटा सा सुधार आप कर सकती हैं
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What kind of improvement?
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AP itna achha likhti ho AGR English font ki jgh Hindi ko Hindi font Mei hi likhen to aur bhi jyada achha rhega
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I understand your concern dear, but many have asked me to write in English font because Hindi font will make it dificult for them to understand. It is easy for evryone to apprehend English but few are not able to read in Hindi.😊
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Good to know , I just gave my opinion
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Happy blogging 😀🙏
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Beautiful!!
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Thank you Natasha😊😄
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😊
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वाह कितनी भावपूर्ण रचना है
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Thank you so much vaibhaw ji ☺
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your poetry is thoughtful and energising acting like an epitome.
kindly read my poste / poems i write poetry in english you should love it.
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Thank you so much for your kind words.😊 I will surely read your posts😃
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always welcome
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Bahot khoob.. 👍
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Thank you so much 😃
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And thank you for writing such a beautiful piece 👍 Ma’am
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Reblogged this on Brainy Versatility.
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Boht badhiya likha hai Sujata.
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Thank you so much …😃
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😃
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Most lovely lines.
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Thank you so much… dear ! 😃
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wow,,amazing
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Thank you so much 😃
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so raw and beautifully woven.
thanks for sharing this with us 🙂
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Thank u so much dear !
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