Sambandho k sushq marusthal mein,
Kab tak mujhe bhatakna hoga?
Thi kabhi saras sarita jeevan ki,
Ab toh kankad utraya hai,
Aasha ki marichika ko vilok ,
Ye man keval bharmaya hai…
Nirjan wan sa man shunya hua,
Patjhad ki ratein kati hai,
Tis par bhi jhanjhawat kia,
Dekh ye sambhando ki thati hai…
Tu mujhko na sweekarega ,
Teri shrishti mai na apnaungi,
Rach kar koi anyatra lok,
Jeevan amrit wahan paungi….
©abhikavya
Nice…… Try to post in Hindi. It will make yr poem more beautiful
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Okay i will try😊 thank you 😁
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Best of luck…. Keep writing keep sharing
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should’ve written it in Hindi.. its impact would have been much more. But it is a wonderful poem indeed and the words got so beautiful in pure Hindi !!
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Okayy i will try😊 thank you so much😄
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Though many are asking for post in Hindi script, I find this easier to read.
More importantly- beautiful
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Thank you so much😄😄
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So beautiful…
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Thank you so much😃😊
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👌👌
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Thank you so much😄
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Beautiful again. 🙂
I read someone saying that writing in Hindi would make it more beautiful, I couldn’t agree more. But also, I take quite a lot of time reading in Hindi than in English.
P.S. Thanks for the follow. Much appreciated.
P.S.S. I am guessing it was your birthday day before yesterday, and if I am right, Happy Belated Birthday. 😀
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Thank you
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You’re welcome. 😁
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Indian woman ki problems ka bhut achha varnan Kia Hai !
Aur shabdon ka prayog to AP kmaal krti Hai bhut achhe mam!
Abhi apke blog ko follow krne Mei Khushi hogi 🙏
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Thank you so much for this lovely understanding of poem😊😄
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😇
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What a beautiful composition!!
Charu🌻🌻
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Thank you so much😊😃
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वाह दीदी वाह बहुत ही अच्छा 👌👌👌👌
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Thank you so much 😃
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Good.a rebellious tuch in poem.
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Indeed it is a rebel for peace & happiness for women 😃
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बहुत बहुत बेहतरीन मित्र!!
इतनी खूबसूरत भावनाओं को कृपया हिंदी में व्यक्त करने की एक छोटी सी प्रयास जरूर करें!!
शुभकामनाएं आपको!!💐💐
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Thank you so much dear ! glad that you liked 😄
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😃😃
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